Roller Coaster Trivia

Jul 30, 2015 10:47
I like to ride roller coasters.

When roller coasters fall, you can feel a unique floating sense.

This feeling is called air-time, which is due to the fact that minus gravity floats your internal organs.

I really like this moment.

If you rode a roller coaster, about 50 kcal might be consumed.

Furthermore, it is said that riding roller coasters have a beauty effect, because they give you the willies and make you secrete female hormone.

Also, in order to scare you, most roller coasters are clockwise.

Many of us we feel discomfort for clockwise, while feel safety for counter clockwise.

By the way, roller coasters are called "ジェットコースター" in Japan.

The name seems derived from Japanese manga.
No. 1　Marika's correction
  • I like to ride roller coasters.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • When roller coasters fall, you can feel a unique floating sense.
  • When a roller coaster reaches the fall, you can feel a unique floating sense.
  • This feeling is called air-time, which is due to the fact that minus gravity floats your internal organs.
  • This feeling is called air-time, which is due to the fact that without gravity, your internal organs float.
  • I really like this moment.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • If you rode a roller coaster, about 50 kcal might be consumed.
  • By riding a roller coaster, you can burn around 50 kcal.
  • Furthermore, it is said that riding roller coasters have a beauty effect, because they give you the willies and make you secrete female hormone.
  • Furthermore, it is said that riding roller coasters have a beautifying effect, because they give you the willies and make you secrete female hormone.
  • Also, in order to scare you, most roller coasters are clockwise.
  • Also, in order to scare you, most roller coasters run clockwise.
  • Many of us we feel discomfort for clockwise, while feel safety for counter clockwise.
  • Many of us feel discomfort going clockwise, while feeling safe going counter-clockwise.
  • By the way, roller coasters are called "ジェットコースター" in Japan.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The name seems derived from Japanese manga.
  • The name seems to be derived from Japanese manga.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2　Lexi's correction
  • I like to ride roller coasters.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • When roller coasters fall, you can feel a unique floating sense.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • This feeling is called air-time, which is due to the fact that minus gravity floats your internal organs.
  • This feeling is called air-time, which is due to the fact that minus gravity causes your internal organs to float.
    　I think it may be correct the way you wrote it, but the way I wrote it sounds more natural.
  • I really like this moment.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • If you rode a roller coaster, about 50 kcal might be consumed.
  • If you ride a roller coaster, about 50 kcal might be consumed.
  • Furthermore, it is said that riding roller coasters have a beauty effect, because they give you the willies and make you secrete female hormone.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Also, in order to scare you, most roller coasters are clockwise.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Many of us we feel discomfort for clockwise, while feel safety for counter clockwise.
  • Many of us we feel discomfort when moving clockwise, while feeling safer when moving counter clockwise.
    　Not sure if that's what you meant, sorry if I misunderstood.
  • By the way, roller coasters are called "ジェットコースター" in Japan.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The name seems derived from Japanese manga.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
  • Many of us we feel discomfort when moving clockwise, while feeling safer when moving counter clockwise.

    Not sure if that's what you meant, sorry if I misunderstood.

Thank you very much for correcting my post!
> Not sure if that's what you meant
I think the corrected sentence completely represents what I meant. Thank you! :D
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